Sunday, February 10, 2013

~WHEN THE WORLD DISAPPEARS..~

This is not something I  normally do, but I LOVE to play with words...and the blogg party says to write something about the painting..so..
(as if you who know me haven't  already guessed! :) 
 
 
I wrote:
 
Sometimes it doesn't matter
Where you are, just who you're with
When loves sweet passion overcomes you
And that kiss is all there is,
The world disappears around you
And you drown in joy and bliss.

If those that witness that passion
Cannot relate to such a kiss
Feel sorry for them if they scathe you,
For they have never known such bliss,
Of a love that overwhelms them
And the joy of such a kiss!

A writer and poet are going to know right away that this is a  mess..but it was fun.
I am not a poet and certainly no judge of art..but I understood this painting.
This kiss.

My love to you, always.
Mona

I am linking up with Magpie Tales..


16 comments:

  1. A very wonderful "First Kiss"!

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  2. That is wonderful - I didn't know you were a poet!

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  3. Just beautiful. What you had to say about and the painting. Love both.
    Karen

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  4. I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry and seeing the painting that inspired it.

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  5. beautifully interpreted, beautifully written, just perfect!

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  6. And we drown in joy and bliss...thank you Mona.

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  7. The perfect poem for a wonderful painting. I know exactly where you are coming from.
    You have a hidden talent Mona.
    Hugs

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  8. I completely understand this kiss and your poetry as well. It's lovely, Mona... Hugs

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  9. Oh Girl, your phone is gonna be ringing off the hook! I loved it! Have a blessed day dear friend, HUGS!

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  10. At LAST!! Another of your lovely poems!

    I often wish you'd share some more of those enchanting little childhood tales, of the wee meadow creatures and little lives lived so small. We all need some of that shrinking magic now and then, for the enjoyment AND for the perspective it gives to everyday things.

    Hope you're staying well and warm,

    rachel

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  11. This has made all of us remember, Mona...thank you!...:)JP

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  12. It is a great piece of art, isn't it? And it's clear you understood it perfectly.

    =)

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  13. I have always found kissing people , when i randomly encounter them, to be a very fortunate event, you can sense the sweet energy a mile away ! . Good one , thankyou.

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  14. Hi Mona,
    Thanks for your visit, it's been a long time, too long!! I've enjoyed browsing your blog and catching up. I also enjoyed seeing all the pictures of your family!

    I love this art and the poem you wrote to go with it! Great job!

    So good to hear from you!

    Katherine

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